ELIMINATION…… FIRST BLOOD….. (not literally)

Feedback from the class, of our elimination story idea

  • Use Ambient sound
  • Try merging both ideas
  • People enjoy the story of idea 2 more than idea 1
  • Add a strain sfx on the rope
  • Cut down slide

The feedback that we got back from the class was very useful to an extend. The reason I say “to an extend” is because some of this feedback we had already planned to add or change to our idea, but it was good to hear that we were all on the same page.

“What is the inciting event?”

I believe the inciting event for our animation will be the moment when our knife wielding character will be tension between our 2 main characters (who we will name Tom and Jerry for no reason) as they make the decision to cut Keith the cow loose. Obviously the character won’t say “HEY! Let’s cut Keith loose” because our idea involves Jerry coming up with the idea of cutting Keith loose and Tom encouraging him to do it, while Keith is no the wiser and is still just a happy cow.

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